Thursday, November 4, 2010
Victors thought pt.1 ch.7
Oh my gosh I just got a letter from my dad. It stated that William has been murdered.Who could have done such a thing. He also wants me to come back home and comfort elizabeth.What should I do Im a wreck me and Clerval are crying like crazy. ..... I guess im going to go back home. I need to help Elizabeth.
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You should tell more about how Victor feels. Talk about how he felt when he got the note, about going back home, and how he feels about seeing Elizabeth again. Also, there are multiple grammatical errors that need to be fixed. :)
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