Friday, November 12, 2010
ch.13 love lost
Well it seems like everyone is sad.And some lady just came to town she is quite normal nothing strange.But to me it seems Felix likes her.So they went to felix house and were conversating.They talked all the way into the night until she left. But I think I like the lady. But I know she is not for me we are too different.
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Sir, you are suppose to put spaces between your sentences! You should consider putting a little more effort into this project, especially since we were given like an hour in class to work on it. Elaborate more on how your person is feeling. You also need to correct multiple spelling and grammatical errors.
ReplyDeleteI noticed your post are short. It might help if you explain everything thoroughly. As you are writing assume the reader has not read the book and answer some questions that you think they would say. This is supposed to be constructive so another thing is be careful not to be repetitive.
ReplyDeletesigned joy